Correcting our script

After turning in our script, our instructor returned it to us in order to correct some of our mistakes. As side from various grammatical issues, our most significant problem was continuity and connections. For example, when we first wrote our script we decided to have a flashback of our two protagonists when they were little children. Our instructor advised us to add something that would help show that those little girls were the two protagonists. In order to help build this connection, we decided to add a beauty mark to both the young version and the older version of that character so that it would be more obvious they were the same person. For the other character, we decided to add glasses to both the young and older version. We have decided that for other scenes we are going to attempt to film them and see if they make sense and if not we will rewrite that particular scene. The process trial and error will help us fix the continuity issues.